concert photography critique

Concert photography critique for Paul Put B/W on your facebook, you asked if I could submit here. B/w was took in bar and colour pics in a night club. I […]

Concert photography critique for Paul

Put B/W on your facebook, you asked if I could submit here. B/w was took in bar and colour pics in a night club. I work as a bathroom Installer, but hope some day to become a photographer.  Couple of years ago I started taking pics at marathon events and selling on internet when I wasn’t running myself. My dream would be to make a living in Benidorm Spain taking pics of night clubers and holiday makers.
A friend has already asked me to do her wedding in September 2014 as she says she likes the pics I take. I’m slowly working through your videos which are all really interesting.
 All the best and Happy New Year. Paul
Paul
thank you for your submission. I will apply my Tudor Rating system directly to your photos and so should you.

Girl at the bar in black and white

Content – 1  out of 10 – this is not even a subject but an accident. I am not sure if you really want to show people backs.

Composition 2 out of 10 – i do not see any intent or arranging anything. the only quality in terms of composition is that the subject is well proportioned in the frame, but that is hardly a quality item in this context

Image quality – 3 out of 10. Image is dark, underexposed, and having in in black and white does not make it an artistic shot

Overall TRS mark is 2 out of 10.

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Singers on stage

Content 5 out of 10. what is so special about singers on stage? I guess concerts are more interesting than people on the street and this is just me. if you have a connection with this band, please give yourself another mark

Composition 2 out of 10. Who is the subject? the left one,. the right one both? This arrangements suggests that the subject is the banner at the back occupying the central and most visible space in the picture

Image quality 5 out of 10 – Image is well exposed nice colour tones, I am suspecting your camera was on automatic?

Overall TRS Mark – 4
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I have already done the critique for this photo .see link here
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Paul
I appreciate taking the time and submitting these photos, and I understand you have an interest in photography. please see other people, take other photos, apply this rating system and think about it. I would be interested to see 3 more pictures from you after you take 1000 photos in between
pleas reate them yourself and send them back only if you are confident they are above 5 TRS mark
Hope you do not take this other than an encouragement
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