Hi Ahmad,
I will be giving you feedback based on my personal opinion. All three photographs will be judged as they are similar in content. Thank you Ahmad for submitting your work for us to critique.
Content: 6/10
Feel free to give a higher content than what I chose to give Ahmad.
Composition: 8/10
Everything is balanced really well. I would try to add some extra room on the 1st photograph at the bottom if anything.
Image Quality: 8.5 /10
All these photographs are really great to look at. When I see these photographs it reminds me of those you see in a Nissan, Toyota, etc… magazine at the local dealership they give when you come in. My favorite is probably the 3rd photograph. Excellent in my opinion!
TRS Score: 8/10
Conclusion: Ahmad, you have a good eye for photography. I like how apply your signature in the photographs where it’s not jumping right out at you like other photographers that I’ve seen in the past. Everything is sharp and balanced well. You know how to use the camera and all the settings from the info on the photographs too. Keep up the excellent work Ahmad!
Kevin
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Ahmad
my ratings
content – 5 out of 10. nothing I have not seen before, no emotional connection with me, but that is personal. rate your own content and make the average
Composition 4 out of 10. there is something but not properly followed through. none of them have the rules of composition applied. subject is not placed in the right location in the picture and fight with other elements for attention. it is distracting.
Quality 9 out of 10 – very good
you do the math
Christian
Thank you Sir , your words will taken into consideration
I’m still junior photographer and it very important to me to learn from the right person , hope next time i will do better .
thanks again Chrstian
Kevin Hays thank you for your warm words , it did make my day and meant something to me really , i hope my next collection will be away much better than this , Promise =)
my purpose of this thing is to learn from professionals this is what will move me to the next level , your notes well taken seriously .
till next time 😉
godspeed
You are welcome Ahmad. Not all of the judges will have the same opinion therefore it’s more beneficial to have more than 1 to give a critique. Here where I live those are classic examples of photographs that appear in car dealership magazines, but where Christian is located at things are different 🙂 Each of us see things a little different on certain photographs and that’s good.
Hopefully with both of our comments you can take each one and progress your photography work to the next level. Until then keep shooting and have a wonderful day.
Maybe Simon will chime in and give his comments as well 🙂
Kevin