Critique for Donny

Dear Christian

I’m Donny from Indonesia, this is the first time I submit photo for critique, kindly give me critique and honest opinions about my photo. Details about my photo are as follow:

All photos taken using Nikon D3200 with AF-S DX NIKKOR 55-300mm f/4.5-5.6G ED VR lens and post processed in Adobe Lightroom.

Loyd Christina photo details:
– Focal Length 120mm
– F-Stop F/4.8
– Exposure 1/100 sec
– ISO 100

Agatha Reyzky Permata Alam photo details:
– Focal Length 240mm
– F-Stop F/5.3
– Exposure 1/25 sec
– ISO 100

Jennifer Tungka photo details:
– Focal Length 86mm
– F-Stop F/4.5
– Exposure 1/60 sec
– ISO 100

I would like to know are there any mistakes I made, is it good composition, etc. Thank you very much.

Best Regards,
Donny Kurniawan

Hello Donny,

Thank you for submitting your photographs to be critiqued.  I will give you my honest opinion on each photograph.

Agatha Reyzky

Agatha Reyzky

Content:  6.5 / 10

Nice capture Donny.  Her expression makes you wonder what she’s thinking about.  Almost a cross between a candid shot and a posed.

Composition:  7.5 / 10

Composition is done well.  You have used the ROT and kept the photograph balanced.

Image Quality:  7.5 / 10

Overall the image is good. Nice bokeh and skin tones.   There are some detail information in her eyes that appears lost.  Since this is a scaled down version the original could be better.  I like this photograph the best out of the three you submitted.

TRS Score:  7 / 10

 

Jennifer Tungka

Jennifer Tungka

 

Content:  5/10

Just an average photograph in terms of content.  It does have potential to be more interesting however.

Composition:  6/10

The composition is good with  a few exceptions.  The pole in the background is distracting.  When doing a crop leave more room above her head since this isn’t a close up shot.

Image Quality:  5/10

Again, it’s hard to tell from the scaled down version which is fine, but this looks like a shot straight from the camera.  If you would have positioned her to where the background wasn’t as “busy” this photograph would be much better.

TRS Score:  5.3 

 

Loyd Christina

Loyd Christina

Content:  5/10

Same as the other photographs.

Composition:  7/10

If I were to make any adjustment it would be to position the subject on the left side of the photograph.

Image Quality:  6.5 / 10.

You have a nice bokeh and the focus is on her which is exactly what you want in a portrait.  Even though the background could possibly be busy, you have positioned her far enough away from and used a large aperture to give that nice blur we want in a portrait.  You may want to try a small vignette to darken the outside areas.

TRS Score:  6/10

 

Conclusion:

Donny,

Your composition is really good and you seem to have an eye for photography.  My next step would be to purchase some new glass such as a prime 85mm 1.8 .  I usually try to stay in 70-110 range for shooting portraits with an aperture of 2.4-4 unless I want the background to add interest to the photograph to some degree.  You can purchase a 50mm prime lens for slightly over $100 which should give you a nice focal length on the DX format if I’m not mistaking.  I’m a Canon user, but I believe the DX is almost the same as the APS-C from canon crop SLR’s.

Notice how your backgrounds may affect the photograph.  #1 and #3 doesn’t have a problem 🙂

Soften the skin some, sharpen eye lashes, brows, enhance the eyes as these are just some of the things that may need to be done on each portrait.

Happy Shooting!

 

Kevin
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My name is Kevin Hays and I've always had an interest in fine art. From an early age I always had a pencil in my hand. At the age of 18 I was accepted as a professional watercolor artist and photographer. I enjoy drawing, painting, basketball, photography, woodworking, gaming, spending time with the family, advancing my education among other things. For a more detailed BIO you can visit http://www.kevinhaysphotography.com/about