Lady and the Band
“Hello my name is Ryan Coleman..I am the lead photographer at LIFTO VISUALS (LIFTOVISUALS.COM) Would love for you to critique my work.”
Ryan
thank you for your submission. It looks I do not really to critique your work as you are a professional photographer already. Your images are powerful, well taken, you know light, you know composition. I love the first 2 images, they have an original colour language, I believe the band integrates well in the background. In another instance I would have said that the images are too busy, but I believe they serve the purpose well in this case. I see you have used strobes on location ?! Very good idea as I see the sunlight coming form the back. Your choice is well balanced.
I love your pictures.they have something original and I believe that should be preserved…
The last one is out of focus though !? – was that the intent?
The image below is out of focus when looking closely and the focus is on the lady shoes. I am not very fond of that, I would focus on the face and the eyes as that would the point, wouldn’t it?
Other than I had a look on your website. I have a MAC and my browsing experience was not the best. you should have a chat with your webdesigner. It works slow, not very friendly and I believe you need to integrate some optimisation to improve your visibility in google and increase you traffic/business
best wishes and good luck with your business
Thanks for the critique! Yes I used strobes..For the outside picture I used two strobes as key light and the sun as rim light..For the couch shot I used two strobes..One as a key light and another as a rim light. Now that I look at it I did miss focus on the last shot..Thanks for your critique, it’s greatly appreciated as we are always trying to find ways to improve our work and visibility ..I’m getting the website updated immediately..Again..Thanks!
Ryan
good luck with your business. Feel free to contribute and if you have anything to share in regards photography, opinions, articles or just make comments on a photo that you take, this is the right place to do it
Christian