shade of life, different strokes and world of bliss

Photo critique for Francisc Dear Francisc thank you for your submission. I am pleasantly surprised to see on original approach to photography as yours. The images breath an artistic feeling […]

Photo critique for Francisc

Dear Francisc

thank you for your submission. I am pleasantly surprised to see on original approach to photography as yours. The images breath an artistic feeling and definitely you use images to express. You prove that good photography is not necessarily about sharpness of an image, but the whole colour, light composition, content and idea

Shades of Life

shade of life

Composition is perfect. I like the fact there is a rhythm with the same element, but different in colour. That shows good aesthetic eye. Image would have been boring the other way, but this is interesting. Also the angle of the candles seen from above is a good choice. I like the image very much. Did you arrange this for the photo, or you just happened to see the arrangement somewhere and you have decided to take a shot?

colour balance is very nice, a nice cold and refreshing feeling…I can sense originality and the artist at work

Different Strokes

different strokes

I am not sure i understand how you made this, but it is visually appealing, just for making it difficult to read on purpose. It is interesting as I am still wondering what is it?

This is a happy exception when breaking the rules of composition works. The converging point is no exactly in the middle, but not far enough creating tension.I love the fact there a various presence of colours and lines are not straight, a bit relaxed. Despite the fact it is a good image, I would probably not hang this on the wall, like the first one. Not sure why, cannot explain, you are the artists 🙂

 World of bliss

world of bliss

 

Frangipani flowers are delicate and beatiful. I have them in my garden, but photographing flowers is a bit overrated in my personal opinion. That does not have to affect your opinion, it is just that flowers are very often in many photographers’ work. I want to see something different as I am not able by looking at your picture to tell and to  know what makes it different than the other hundreds of thousands.

I like the light, the colour, very relaxing. The composition is not well closed, I would bring the cropped top left flower in the image and the first flower to he right to get to the third line…looks random

Conclusion

I would be interested to see more of your work as it looks like you are an artists and have something to say. Photography is a good way to tell.In your case you do not have the be sharp, you need to be yourself, which you do well. Your work is well received here at the Academy and I would encourage anyone with this kind of skill to send their images for comments. We love when we judge good photography

 

 

 

 

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