The fence, house fly, city lights

The fence, house fly, city lights photo critique Hi I’m Nipun from India. I really like your youtube channel and i watch your every video. you’re inspirational and i really […]

The fence, house fly, city lights

photo critique

Hi

I’m Nipun from India. I really like your youtube channel and i watch your every video. you’re inspirational and i really like your work. i am a beginner and i click a lot of photos.. it’s more like my favourite thing and i request you to tell me where i am going wrong and where i need to put more effort. I’ll be very obliged if you do so.
Thank you
Nipun
Nipun
Thank you for your submission and for your eagerness to have comments on your work. I have asked you to rate your own photos as well and for the future, this will be a condition of entry

Hand on a fence

Content 6.5

I like the blunt statement, you could use this idea to talk about freedom, but I am not sure if you really wanted to say something. I good and interesting approach, quite original , but not strong enough for a wow factor. Still a good image in my opinion

Composition 8

Rule of thirds – tick! for the hand position and for the depth of field – double tick

Image quality 8 

The image looks good, well exposed

TRS mark  7.5 

A very good mark for this image, not sure if you really intended a content or it is just a random depth of field shot, but we judge the result, If you could explain what did you want to tell us , it would be good!

The Fence

Flies on a balustrade

Content 3

Flies…they are everywhere…nothing interesting. This is not a macro image and does not raise any interest to me.

Composition 7

I can see you know composition and it became a reflex for you. I have no doubts of your skills on this topic

Image quality 7 

The image looks good, well exposed, the depth of field is nice, maybe too shallow. 2 files in focus, 2 not .. ?!

TRS mark  5.6

Get yourself a macro lens if you want to do something more interesting

Housefly

City night lights

Flies on a balustrade

Content 4

Night long exposure on a street…have seen this thousands of times. I cannot see anything else interesting in the image

Composition 8

You have used diagonal lines to show depth..well done.

Image quality 7 

The image looks good, a little bit overexposed, I see you can use the long exposure

TRS mark 6.3

Citylights
Nipun
I see you have got skills and a good eye. If you work telling us better stories you can really make good photography. Think about what you want to tell us, give us some drama, some love , some whatever, not the things we all see and know day to day.
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