TRS – Photo Critique for Indra Tjakradharma

 

Image Title                       : Bride coming Out

Author                                 : Indra Tjakradharma

Photo Critique by          : Mr Robert Chircop [Academy of Photography Judge]

indra BRIDES COMING OUT

Content: TRS mark 6/10

A bride stepping out of her wedding car. A fairly pleasing image albeit common place in events such as these.

Composition: TRS mark 6/10

Generally, the composition is fairly good. I might have cropped out some of the right side of the vehicle to give more attention to the bride and try to have her on a third (see rule of thirds). The groom, on looking with a smile is a nice touch.

The pink bouquet and the car door handle decorations add interest to this image.

Image quality: TRS mark 7/10

Image quality is fine. The image is sharp and your highlight and shadow detail are well controlled.

 

Final TRS mark:  6+ out of 10

 

 

Image Title                       : Husband & Wife

Author                                 : Indra Tjakradharma

Photo Critique by          : Mr Robert Chircop [Academy of Photography Judge]

indra HUSBAND & WIFE

Content: TRS mark 7/10

Bride and groom shot in an artistic style. The crucifix in the background tells us that the couple are in a holy place, a church.

Composition: TRS mark 7/10

This is bold. I like it. I particularly admire your artistic interpretation of this image. The camera angle, together with the straights lines in the background are striking. The bride and groom’s facial expressions are affectionate and loving. This is an artistic and evocative image. Well done.

Image quality: TRS mark 7/10

As for the first image above, your exposure is well controlled. Blurring the background in this one gives emphasis to the subject, the couple, yet still providing the viewer with ambiance. Very nice work.

 

Final TRS mark: 7 out of 10

 

 

 

Image Title                       : Wedding Cake

Author                                 : Indra Tjakradharma

Photo Critique by          : Mr Robert Chircop [Academy of Photography Judge]

indra WEDDING CAKE

Content: TRS mark 6/10

A bride and her wedding cake. The bride’s head turned to one side as it is creates a sense of anonymity.

Composition: TRS mark 6/10

Compositionally speaking, this is fine. The bride’s pose is subjective although the photo has a visually pleasing overall effect. I might have cloned out the black patch on the right side of the photo as this creates distractions. Some cropping, especially on the left side, might have suited this image better.

Image quality: TRS mark 6/10

Image quality is fine. The image is sharp and depth of field is used to a very good effect. You have good control of your camera.

Final TRS mark: 6 out of 10

Indra, please regard my remarks and overall critique as a means for progression. Your work is pleasing and you use your tools effectively. Keep up the good work.

I would be very grateful if you could provide me with some feedback. Thank you.

Robert.

 
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